SSAT寫作高分的獲得須要考生留意一些細節題目,特別是在測驗中不要應用一些拉低考生寫作分數的語句,下面留學SSAT測驗頻道為考生網絡整頓了一些SSAT寫作要防止的句子,願望能給考生供給一些參考。
1、冗雜的句式
在時光重要的情形下,很多門生寫出來的句子沒有標點銜接,大概只有逗號。比方:
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
咱們有三種修正辦法:
1)標註分號:Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.應用分號把具備自力意義的句式離開,但同時向讀者註解句子表現的寄義之間存在必定接洽。
2)應用連詞:Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.這也是最有用的修正辦法,從句仍舊是自力的,同時也註解了從句之間的接洽。
3)標註句號:Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
如許,一個自力的句子就釀成幾個自力的從句。
湧現冗雜句式另有一個緣故原由,便是誤用however、nevertheless、furthermore、likewise、therefore等副詞。比方:
毛病:Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
準確:Current insurance practices are discriminatory. Furthermore, they make insurance too expensive for the poor
2、不完全的句式
正式寫作中的每句話都必需有自力從句。所謂自力從句,便是包括主語、謂語,而且不如下述連詞作為句子開首:
After if than whenever although in order that though where as provided that unless whether because since until while before so that
毛病:Global warming. This is what the scientists and journalists are worried about.
準確:Global warming is the cause of concern for scientists and journalists.
留意,以並列連詞——and、but、or、nor和for作為單句的開首,則是可以接收的。
比方:
準確:Most people would agree that indigent patients should receive wonderful health care. But every treatment has its price.
以上內容給考生具體先容了SSAT寫作要防止應用的句子,供考生參考,不完全的句式沒有自力的從句,而冗雜的句式則有兩個以上的從句,而這多少從句之間並無恰本地連接,這兩種毛病都是咱們應當盡力防止的,願望考生在備考的時刻能引發看重。