GRE寫作練筆心得例題講解

2016/05/17 瀏覽次數:5 收藏
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  考生想要在GRE寫作部門的測驗中獲得高分,就須要在日常平凡練筆過程當中對各類細節要點多加留心。下面小編就和眾人分享GRE寫作練筆芯得例題講授。

  1. 保持練筆

  GRE寫作備考時,發起既不要過火重要,也不要輕敵;必定要鍥而不舍地舉行溫習;信任熟能生巧,發起天天花30分鐘看範文,循規蹈矩潛移默化,就曉得該怎樣寫了。

  2. 重點演習構想

  發起把題幹裏觸及到的邏輯論證點都枚舉出來,把每部門總結出來。這時候須要把每道題都細心瀏覽,然後思慮一下若何論證本身的概念,舉行簡略的構想,在測驗時做到防患未然。比方:The following is part of a business plan being discussed at a board meeting of the Perks Company:

  "It is no longer cost-effective for the Perks Company to continue offering its employees a generous package of benefits and incentives year after year. In periods when national unemployment rates are low, Perks may need to offer such a package in order to attract and keep good employees, but since national unemployment rates are now high, Perks does not need to offer the same benefits and incentives. The money thus saved could be better used to replace the existing plant machinery with more technologically sophisticated equipment, or even to build an additional plant."

  Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.

  剖析:1.因果類毛病,賦閑率很高不必定代表P公司的員工不受迎接。由於大概有其他緣故原由致使員工在市場上異常搶手。好比這家公司的培訓做得很到位,員工的才能都很強;大概是這家公司有很多秘密的內容,而挖走員工便能盜取這些秘密。總之作者賦閑率高就不須要持續勉勵員工的假如有錯。2.沒有效成長的概念看題目,縱然福利的下降不會致使P公司大批喪失員工,這一做法也存在著其他的負面影響。好比員工下降的踴躍性大概會對事情的質量發生影響,從而直接影響公司的產物質量與榮譽;而縱然沒有以上這個影響,下降福利也不是進步利潤的獨一門路。加大科研投入,堅持產物技巧的領先,大概是改良公司的薪金構造,都是能使公司堅持紅利的辦法。更多相幹內容請點擊》GRE寫作辭匯若何靈巧應用。

  3. 看重開首段

  開首通常是2到4句話,包含

  1. 復述論證,即把作者的論證舉行簡明簡要的歸納綜合,萬萬不要照抄照搬。

  2. 扼要解釋本身的論證思緒。3)指出邏輯上的可托度,即本身下文的論證立場。

  參考範文:

  The author of Perks Company's business plan recommends that funds currently spent on the employee benefits package be redirected to either upgrade plant machinery or build an additional plant. The author reasons that offering employees a generous package of benefits and incentives year after year is no longer cost-effective given current high unemployment rates, and that Perks can attract and keep good employees without such benefits and incentives. While this argument has some merit, its line of reasoning requires close examination.

  To begin with, the author relies on the reasoning that it is unnecessary to pay relatively high wages during periods of high unemployment because the market will supply many good employees at lower rates of pay. While this reasoning may be sound in a general sense, the particular industry that Perks is involved in may not be representative of unemployment levels generally. It is possible that relatively few unemployed people have the type of qualifications that match job openings at Perks, if this is the case, the claim that it is easier now to attract good employees at lower wages is ill-founded.

  Secondly, the argument relies on the assumption that the cost-effectiveness of a wage policy is determined solely by whatever wages a market can currently bear. This assumption overlooks the peripheral costs of reducing or eliminating benefits. For example, employee morale is likely to decline if Perks eliminates benefits; as a result, some employees could become less productive, and others might quit. Even if Perks can readily replace those employees, training costs and lower productivity associated with high turnover may outweigh any advantages of redirecting funds to plant construction. Moreover, because the recommended reduction in benefits is intended to fund the retrofitting of an entire plant or the building of a new one, the reduction would presumably be a sizable one; consequently, the turnover costs associated with the reduction might be very high indeed.

  In conclusion, this argument is not convincing, since it unfairly assumes that a broad employment statistic applies to one specific industry, and since it ignores the disadvantages of implementing the plan. Accordingly, I would suspend judgment about the recommendation until the author shows that unemployment in Parks' industry is high and until the author produces a thorough cost-benefit analysis of the proposed plan.

  4. 嚴厲把控時光

  GRE寫作備考時,考生也要側重練習本身的寫作部門。在對範文充足懂得以後,可以隨機選取標題,約莫每部門十篇上下,然後依照測驗的請求,強制本身在劃定時光內完成。如許舉行重復練習。考前一樣平常每部門寫十篇到十五篇,就能夠堅持優越的狀況了。

  以上便是本日小編為眾人分享的GRE寫作練筆芯得例題講授,願望對加入GRE測驗的考生有所贊助。想要加入GRE培訓雅思培訓的考生請選取。末了,小編祝眾人出國留學之路順順遂利!更多出色內容盡在留學GRE測驗頻道。

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