雅思口語8分範文評析欣賞

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  本文為眾人帶來雅思白話8分範文剖析,將會經由過程範文的優缺陷和雅思白話四大評分尺度動身,為範文打分,指出範文的優缺陷,願望可以或許給眾人一些贊助。考生也能夠選取本身認為比擬好大概感興致的範文舉行參考進修。

  下面以交際收集類話題social networking為例,為眾人細心講授考官供給的範文。固然,此範文的評價是撤除語音和現場施展狀態的分數考量,而從辭匯,句式,聯貫度和思惟方法幾個方面舉行評判,僅供參考。

  1. What kinds of social networking websites do you like to use?

  Um…I suppose the main one I use is weibo, which is basically the equivalent of Twitter in the West. And um… as well as that, I occasionally use a website called renrenwang, which is essentially a Chinese version of Facebook, although I don’t really use it as much as I used to, because I think weibo’s a bit better.

  “你愛好應用哪一種交際網站?”這裏的答復是微博,考生可以留意一下,開端的“Um…I suppose……”仿佛是有停留的,然則為何還可以或許得高分呢?實在雅思白話恰當的停留並非壞事,有時刻還可以或許給眾人思慮謎底的時光,上述的I suppose實在就註解了答復者在思慮。再來看which is……非限制性定語從句,對微博的說明,相稱於西方的Twitter。And um… as well as that銜接詞,順承到大家網的先容,中文版的臉書,及其上風。全部答復非常完全,定語從句和妥協狀語從句使句式防止單一,辭匯明顯是及格的。有顯著的銜接詞和交換標誌詞,固然有停留然則可以或許給人一種在思慮,與人交換的感到,以是全部答復不論是從辭匯,句式照樣聯貫度上都是異常優良的範文,並且可以或許讓人感遭到交換的氣氛是非常難能寶貴的。

  考生還可以參考積聚下面提煉出來的一些短語和辭匯:

  the equivalent of – 相稱於

  Essentially -大要上;根本上

  Chinese version – 中國版

  2. Is it easy to find real friends on a social networking site?

  I’m honestly not that sure because I’ve never really made a big effort to find friends on the Internet, but thinking about it, I’d say it’s probably not that easy, although it’s definitely possible, because um… I think you never quite know someone properly until you’ve met them in the flesh. At least that’s been my experience anyway!

  “在交際網站上交到真實的同夥簡略嗎?”——起首,坦率的說,是不肯定的,由於沒有試圖在交際網站上交過同夥。然則but thinking about it, I’d say it’s probably not that easy, although it’s definitely possible, because遷移轉變連詞和交換標誌詞同時應用,陳說本身的意見……全部連接是異常慎密的。並且在句式辭匯上的應用也是沒有題目的。同時也可以給人以英式思惟思慮交換的感到。以是綜合起來此謎底也在8分的程度。

  下面是一些比擬隧道的辭匯、短語,考生可以參考應用:

  Properly - thoroughly, completely; 完全地

  In the flesh - 本人

  At least that’s been my experience anyway! - 最少依照我的履歷是如許的!

  綜上所述,一篇優良的範文,考生必需作到辭匯句式相符高分請求,內容的連接和聯貫必需緊湊,且最佳可以或許給人一種交換的感到和旌旗燈號,讓人感到到隧道且是科場上的交換感,別的,最佳應用一些比擬隧道的辭匯和句式,也會為你的謎底加分很多。

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