托福寫作的遣詞和造句技巧

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  新托福寫作重要考核考生對英文的綜合應用才能,個中,對說話的應用尤其看重,以是,整頓來講托福寫作很磨練考生的用詞及造句才能,這也是考生在備考托福寫作測驗時要重視造就的才能,下面關於在遣辭和造句兩方面為考生供給一些指點。

  1. 句型剖析

  英語的句型包含如下幾種,簡略句、復合句、並列句、並列復合句等。在新托福寫作中,一樣平常應用復合句,輔以並列句和並列復合句,固然確定要有簡略句,做到是非句相聯合。下面摘抄幾個句子給眾人熟悉並剖析一下復合句和並列復合句。

  a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

  這句話是一個復合句,由even though引誘的妥協狀語從句。

  b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

  這句話中是一個復合句。with介詞構造中,有一個that引誘的同位語從句對result舉行說明解釋。

  c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

  上句話是一個並列龐雜句。and 銜接了兩個句子,是一個並列句;because引誘的緣故原由狀語從句。

  d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receive slow mark.

  這句話一樣是並列龐雜句。由and銜接兩個句子,成為並列句,再一個which引誘的定語從句。

  2. 有題目的句子枚舉

  剖析以為,考生寫的句子輕易湧現三個題目:一是應用破裂句,二是應用連續句,三是句子銜接不準確。

  1). 破裂句

  所謂破裂句,便是句子不完全,一般為沒有謂語(大概說謂語是動詞的非謂語情勢,如分詞),大概是從句零丁成句。

  破裂句:She singing alone. (無謂語,singing是如今分詞)

  準確句:She is singing alone.

  破裂句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句零丁成句)

  準確句:He did not come because he was sick.

  2).連續句

  所謂連續據,便是兩個句子直連續在一路,既未應用連詞,也未應用準確的標點標記。

  連續句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

  準確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

  準確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.

  3).句子銜接不準確

  所謂句子銜接不準確,便是兩個自力的句子之間以逗號銜接,這是分歧英語語法的。準確的做法因此連詞、分號、冒號、句號等銜接兩個句子。

  不準確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

  準確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

  高分表達

  除在句式上是非句相聯合精確表達外,發起新托福考生要應用一些特別的句式,以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文獲得高分的前提之一。除咱們以前常常提到的高分句式,如倒裝句、誇大句、狀語前置、插入語等,筆者還提出另一個句式的多樣變更,即主語多樣化。下面筆者將枚舉幾個句子歸納綜合先容前面四種句型,而重點剖析主語多樣化。

  正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.

  倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否認詞處於句首的倒裝。)

  正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.

  誇大句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (誇大the internet)

  正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

  狀語前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.

  正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.

  插入語: New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語)

  主語多樣

  1. 她忽然想到了一個主張。

  She suddenly had an idea.

  平日情形下,考生會立時對這句話舉行翻譯,根本不會動句子構造。然則以人作為主語的英語句子老是不可以或許很吸惹人,以是這個句子假如輕微做下修正,今後面的賓語“主張”做主語,這個句子會產生一些變更。

  An idea suddenly occurred to her.

  2. 他開車漫不經心,險些肇事。

  He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.

  這句話仍然是拿人做主語,輕微改一下,把漫不經心這個形容詞的名詞情勢做主語,會大不雷同。

  His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.

  3. 美利堅合眾國創建於1789年。

  The United States of America was founded in 1789.

  這句話沒有任何毛病,然則不敷多樣,可以歷時間作主語。

  The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.

  以上內容便是關於托福寫作遣辭和造句技能的描寫,願望能給考生帶去一些贊助,發起考生在日常平凡的托福寫作備登科能針對分歧的托福寫作話題舉行演習,然後找有履歷的先生舉行作文修正,從而更好的提高。