2015年9月20日GRE寫作真題回憶及解析

　　真題的主要性想必每一名gre考生都是清晰的，經由過程對GRE機經的進修可以贊助考生更好的捉住GRE考題的脈絡，本日留學GRE測驗頻道為考生整頓的是2015年9月20日GRE寫作真題回想及剖析，供考生進修。

　　ISSUE：

　　TOPIC: People's behavior is largely determined by forces not oftheir own making

　　剖析：話題環繞"人類的行動主如果被武力決議的而不是本身成長構成的"，需論述小我的概念。

　　可聯合汗青case ,小我experience等睜開評論辯論，人類的行動到底是被武力逼迫出來的照樣自但是然漸漸構成的，亦或是兩種都算是possible factors。論說文 introduction部門須提出明白的thesis statement, main body中的評論辯論可以一邊倒，也能夠兩方面都相聯合斟酌，make sense便可。

　　ARGUMENT：

　　The vice president ofhuman resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to thecompany's president.

　　"In an effort toimprove our employees' productivity, we should implement electronic monitoringof employees' Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use theInternet from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we areto reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreationalactivities, such as shopping or playing games. By installing software to detectemployees' Internet use on company computers, we can prevent employees fromwasting time, foster a better work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overallprofits."

　　Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Besure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what theimplications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

　　剖析：文本大意：為晉升人員臨盆力，咱們應該電子監控他們對收集的應用。假如咱們決議要削減他們在事情過程當中花賽在小我或文娛運動上的時光，那些在事情站用網的人員有需要標誌出來並遭到處分。經由過程安置檢測人員電腦用網情形，咱們可以防備他們糟蹋時光，培蕎更好的事情品德範例，並晉升整體利潤。

　　聯合文本剖析，"采用電子監控人員應用收集"這一概念，是不是有充足evidence支持， 而且也須要恰當指出這段筆墨的fallacies。Fallacy詳細思踣可觸及：insufficient evidence 證據不充足;incomplete information 信息不完全;changing scopes 差別規模輕率推行;inferring a future condition from a past condition 等。