2015年6月20日SAT官方逐日一題
Writing > Improving Sentences
Part or all of the following sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Select the option that produces the best sentence. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A.
Being that she has a gift for comic timing, Esmeralda is a natural when it comes to storytelling.
(A) Being that she has a gift for comic timing(B) In having a gift for comic timing(C) With her gift for comic timing(D) Although she has a gift for comic timing(E) Comically timed
謎底:C
【剖析】
Choice (C) is correct. It avoids the unidiomatic phrasing and wordiness of the original by replacing the unidiomatic participial phrase “Being that she has a gift for comic timing” with the more concise and idiomatic prepositional phrase “With her gift for comic timing.”