2016年6月4日托福寫作真題回憶及答案解析

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　　6月4日托福綜合寫作真題：金字塔中的shafts真實的用途為什麽

Topic 議題what is the real functions of the shafts in the pyramid.
	Reading	Listening
Thesis 泛論點	Three possible explanations	Against
Sub-point1 分論點1	Shafts are used as ventilation.	The shafts do not stick out and can not reach air.
Sub-point2 分論點2	Shafts have religious meaning with their position correspond to the position of stars, which represent god in Egypt.	The linkage between gods and stars believed by the Ancient Egyptians was raised later than the year when the pyramid was built.
Sub-point 3 分論點3	Shafts are the passageways for the king’s spirit to travel to the afterlife.	Many other pyramids used symbolic images on the wall to represent the passageway.

　　Sample answer:

　　The professor refutes the three explanation raised the reading of the usage of the shafts in the pyramid.

　　First, the professor does not believe the idea mentioned in the reading that shafts are used as the ventilation for workers to breathe fresh air. She pointed out that though the upper shafts stick out to and can reach air, the lower ones can not and they just stop at the wall. Since the construction of the shafts must serve the same function, so the ventilation theory is not plausible.

　　Second, the professor contradicts that the position of shafts has religious meaning. The linkage between gods and stars believed by the Ancient Egyptians was raised later than the year when the pyramid was built.

　　Third, the professor admits that the Ancient Egyptians did believe the king’s spirit can travel to the afterlife, but the traveling passageway is not necessarily tangible. Many other pyramids used symbolic images on the wall to represent the passageway. They believed the king’s soul could pass through the wall without any using of opening.

　　6月4日托福自力寫作真題：

作文標題：	The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.
題型種別:	利弊類
題材種別：	是不是贊成類
相幹舊題：	2009-06-05/2008-06-22
寫作思緒：	這個“方法”是不是到達這個“目標”最佳方法，對付如許的題，一樣平常來說咱們的寫法都是“否認”：這個方法大概有用、然則有弊病、且有更好的方法一二三。然則如果以為贊成更好寫，也是完整可以的。這裏講將兩種都供給。
寫作指點：	Agree： 1. 情況題目跟"大眾,"康健互相關註，許多疾病由惡化的情況致使。人類生計最根本的水和氛圍都被汙染了，怎樣還會康健呢。如工場排放汙水，許多人由由於霧霾致使呼吸疾病。只有情況管理好了，這一代和下一代才有將來。 2. 緊張的情況題目只有當局才有才能辦理，小我比擬難處置，以是這更是當局急切要做的工作。情況題目不是地區性的，是天下性，乃至環球性的，只有當局能力聚集人力和物力經由過程立法等等手腕來凈化情況。 3. 誠然，當局也能夠做其他的工作，如完美醫療系統，然則情況題目倒是最急切和緊迫的。一旦情況損壞到必定水平，很難修復，對康健的影響最長期。 Disagree：妥協段，認可凈化情況對康健是有效，然則情況題目很賣力，奏效慢。完美醫療系統更值得當局做。完美基本舉措措施，如更多運動場和社區健身場合也應做。
辭匯拓展：	Deterioration 惡化 Indispensible 弗成或缺的 Tackle with 處置 Urgent 緊急的 Ameliorate 改良 be closely bound up 互相關註 haze / smog 霧霾 sewage汙水排放