雅思寫作怎樣才能寫好開頭段

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  雅思寫作如安在一個小時內快速完成兩篇文章還要包管質量。在雅思鴻文文中,許多同窗只重視主體段的演習和論點論據的提煉,很少有精神存眷開首段。作為文章給考官的第一印象,實在雅思作文的開首段更加主要。若何寫好開首段,雅思小編為眾人詳解。

  鴻文文開首技能:

  1) 擯棄冗雜模板

  "應用模板,同等四分"的說法大概有些誇大,但也在必定水平上反應了考官對付模板的切齒腐心。實在模板套句並非不克不及用,而是要應用靈巧,不留陳跡。在許多文章中,開首末端的兩個龐雜到爆炸的長句在通篇簡略句和基本語法毛病的映襯下非分特別能幹,這類輕微有些英語常識的人都邑看破的小聰慧,更弗成能逃過考官的眼睛。

  發起門生們積聚一些簡略適用的根本套句,如:

  咱們的生存已離不開…

  We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。

  咱們到處均可以看到…/應用…

  (An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。

  (Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。

  …已成為一個賡續增加的趨向。

  (Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。

  There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urban areas)。

  愈來愈多的人選取…/偏向於以為…

  More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。

  More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits have been brought by air travel)。

  …已再也不罕有

  It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equally important role as their male counterparts in various areas)。

  It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even working at home)。

  人們開端意想到…

  People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on family relationship)。

  在幾十年前,…很少有人會想象到…

  Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life would have changed so greatly due to the use of Internet)。

  2) 開首詳細化

  詳細化的開首是6分和6分以上文章的一大特色,即 "要讓考官認為你這個開首是完整針對標題寫出來的",要做到這一點,就必需牢牢環繞話題睜開。比以下面這道標題:

  The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?

  (開首段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different individuals can hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects。

  (開首段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks。

  (開首段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay。

  開首段一為典範的模板式開首,空話多,與話題幹系小,毫無疑難會引發考官的反感。開首段二固然也應用了模板句,但應用較靈巧,不敷的地方是配景句沒有緊扣話題,固然談到科技影響生存但沒有詳細到'relationship'。開首段三說話雖簡略但牢牢環繞話題'relationships'睜開,靈巧的應用了一些簡短的小套句,而如許詳細化的開首最受考官青睞。

  3) 簡略等於美

  雅思作文考的不是文學教養而是學術寫作才能,即若何應用說話有用的表達概念證實概念,是以,簡略清楚明了的開首會給考官留下效力高的好印象,並且簡略的開首段防止了應用模板的懷疑也節儉了時光。

  例:

  Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks。

  It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.

  末了,寫作重在演習,所謂熟能生巧,開首段的構想亦是同樣。

  以上便是雅思鴻文文開首段如何寫能力出彩的具體內容,在懂得以後,雅思考生要多多參考進修,定能節節高升。