托福寫作滿分結尾的幾種方式

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  一篇讓托福寫作考官滿足的作文,不但要有一個英俊的開首,一個出色的末端對付這篇文章而言一樣主要,下面就給考生分享下托福寫作滿分末端的幾種方法,供考生參考和鑒戒。

  托福寫作招式一:答復題目

  E.g.1 When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

  這個末端段落明白地提出了本身的概念,不是全部的科技都是好的,然則科技也不是完整沒有用途的。

  托福寫作招式二:不要添加新的信息

  E.g.2 Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve’but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

  用一句話明白本身的概念,幸福很難界說,大概有兩個身分起到感化。

  托福寫作招式三:2-3個句子為好

  E.g.3 Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Finally,I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether,which is the last thing parents would want.

  兩句話,作者的立場很明白,門生弗成能花全部的時光去進修,不然就會完整落空對進修的興致,以是也應當給門生一些放松的時光。一樣平常在末端段的最開端部門,考生就應當給考官一個明白的旌旗燈號詞,讓考官懂得文章已進入尾聲了。這裏所謂的旌旗燈號詞便是一些末端段的套句:旌旗燈號詞:Finally,to sum up,in conclusion,in brief,therefore,thus,overall句型:

  1. it can be concluded that…

  2. we can find that…

  3. I think it is also important to remember that

  4. the main point is to make sure that

  5. I believe that/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

  托福寫作招式四:可采取的技能

  1.總結式(重述前文)把在前文中的概念在末端段舉行重述,然則不克不及湧現與開首段大概標題中的單詞反復。

  E.g.4 *In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest? Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this,and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support,because this is no longer a problem for individual families,but for society as a whole.

  把solutions舉行簡略地再次描述—怙恃、好的托兒所、當局的資金扶直。

  *Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? I think,therefore,that governments need to raise this awareness in the generalpublic.Children can be educated about environmental issues at school,but adults need to take action.Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging,such as plastic bags,by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

  重述上文的內容,由當局采用辦法—進步意識(children & adult)詳細辦法(進步價錢、輪回應用、罰款)

  2.兩分式把文章觸及到的主題人大概物分成兩種,對其舉行分離解釋。

  E.g.5 *In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience,important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this? Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances,few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work.If learning responsibilities and work experienceare considered to be important,then children can acquire these by having light,part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home,which are unpaid,but undoubtedly of value in children’s development。

  對付有錢的家庭而言,家長很少送小孩去做童工;假如是為了錢大概其他,可做兼職。

  *Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others,however,think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.In conclusion,I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves,but that all change,including that which is imposed on people,does not necessarily have good outcomes.

  假如是人們本身的選取那末轉變是一件好的工作,但若是被強加於身,轉變則不會帶來任何可喜的後果。

  3.折衷式:很難斷定In conclusion,I do not think個中到底誰占領主導位置,大概甚麽是最主要的,二者是缺一弗成的,需配合存在。

  E.g.6 Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. That either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person,but that both have powerful effects.How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.

  二者是缺一弗成的,稟賦和後天造就一致主要。

  以上便是留學托福測驗頻道為考生整頓的托福寫作滿分末端的幾種方法,願望對你的托福測驗會有必定的贊助。發起考生在備考的時刻能對上述這幾種英俊的末端辦法都有必定的演習,然後再依照本身的寫作習氣挑選出合適本身的。