如何寫出色雅思大作文主體部分

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  辦法一 多進修一些精彩的範文,看一下別人是若何對待這一題目的,他們是若何表達本身的概念的,他們又是若何來支撐本身的概念的,和他們的寫法有河鑒戒的地方。

  辦法二 多關懷一下時勢消息,特殊是要看一些英語消息和報導,從中可懂得天下的動態,最新的時勢看法和對時勢的透辟剖析,這些內容都有助於咱們樹立本身的概念和拓展咱們的思緒。

  在弁言段建立了本身的概念以後,最重要的義務便是舉行一個“brainstorming”,顧名思義,便是咱們應只管即便地想出一些與主體段落中每一個小段相幹的設法主意,來為主體段落的寫作作好預備。

  先舉比方下

  Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.

  Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.

  這是咱們在構想時剖析的一道標題,如前所述,主體段落分成兩個小段:

  Main body:

  A women’s advantages and disadvantages of raising children

  B men’s advantages and disadvantages of raising children

  下面咱們就來舉行brainstorm,為它們找一些詳細的論據:

  A women’s advantages and disadvantages of raising children

  1 women have more understanding of children’s needs.

  2 women can be more patient with young children.

  3 women can devote more time and energy to children.

  4 women tend to indulge their children and spoil them.

  B men’s advantages and disadvantages of raising children

  1 men can teach young children to be more creative.

  2 men often tell young children to be independent.

  3 men raise children by making them brave and decisive.

  4 men sometimes lose patience with children.

  透過如許的思緒整頓,主體段落的血肉已異常飽滿了,假如再加之作者的句子構造的話,這將是一篇極具層次性和邏輯性的文章了。