GMAT作文模板使用方法及參考範文3

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  要想在GMAT作文中牟取高分,只是背幾個GMAT作文模板是遠遠不敷的。GMAT頻道在此與眾人分享一些備考技能,讓GMAT作文滿分輕而易舉。

  三、【第三種】是第二種的一種變式

  1. 疑難句或反問句(推舉後者,語氣更強。好比:Doesn’t it…?)

  2 講故事

  3 概念

  【留意】:

  2和3都同樣,加之1,目標是:讓讀者感到到你的油滑、調皮與可愛,讓文章不至於那末呆板,特殊是對付已比擬boring的raters,這是一種從情感上拿分的方法!

  Eg:請本身經由過程下面這段話找出issue是甚麽

  Could the bad old days of economic decline be about to return? Since OPEC agreed to supply-cuts in March, the price of crude oil has jumped to almost $26 a barrel, up from less than $10 last December. This near-tripling of oil prices calls up scary memories of the 1973 oil shock, when prices quadrupled, and 1979-80, when they also almost tripled. Both previous shocks resulted in double-digit inflation and global economic decline. So where are the headlines warning of gloom and doom this time?

  Issue:煤油漲價是不是會致使經濟闌珊?

  可見,這段話是偏向清晰的。

  Eg:門生演習——請分離用三種開首方法寫一遍

  "A powerful business leader has far more opportunity to influence the course of a community or a nation than does any government official. " Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above

  (我的):

  第一種:很好

  The author argues that a leader of great ability can affect the operation of a society or a country more widely and deeply. Suppose that in a society filled with this conception, the public will ignore the function and effect of government, then gov’s work will lose support and even be intervered , thus losing proper control of some bad things: free ride, speculation, etc, which cannot be malpulated by business org. Thus, I hold that it is equally important…

  第二種:

  J, a powerful leader of corp K——the chief client of the estate company P, had less effect on the control of P’s vicious violation of ethic rules: heavy speculation than the intervene of gov. In 1990, the boom of P, P took advantage of this prime period to induce miracle amount of foreign money to the US and at the same time it charged vitally higher price of its 3rd office building near the Los Angeles airport, thus spiring the anger of public. Facing this situation, k stopped its relationship with P to punish P, but this won’t have a mearable change on P’s action, while gov improved the tax on their every office building to be sold largely——ultimately, P has to put its price down to the average leve. Therefore, in my opion, gov has a more far-reaching impact on the operation of a community or a nation.

  【存在的題目】:

  1)第一句:沒有說當局的影響多的效果是甚麽,就只能讓讀者讀出一個征象,然則讀不出偏向。

  我應當在我的筆墨中明白給出偏向是甚麽。Ie:

  假如我支撐“gov感化更主要”:就說“當局影響更大則有甚麽利益”或“企業影響更大有甚麽弊端”;

  假如我支撐“企業應當感化更大”:就反之。

  而我今朝的表述:只有“當局影響更大”,沒有“效果若何”,便是究竟出來了,概念沒有,以是不可!

  【修正後】:第一句——

  Gov has larger effect on the control of the bad speculation of corp J, an estate company, than J’s chief client K, an medical corp, thus preventing the flowing of work force and further decline of stock price of J.[LC1]

  2)中央的elaboration過長太繞:讓人讀的煩、輕易讀不懂,必需改得短且精華精辟一些。

  第三種:

  Doesn’t a powerful leader can really affect a course of a nation more widely than the government?

  【解釋】:

  以上3種屬於高分的寫法,但不是只範圍於這3個,有本身以為好的也能夠。

  在進入II以前,有一點說一下:關於“焦點觀點”和“觀點間幹系”的界定——

  (1) 道理:要對一個概念揭櫫我的批評(贊成或分歧意),條件是曉得這個概念是甚麽。而界定的目標便是“搞清晰標題甚麽”的進程!

  (2)怎樣處置:基於1)——

  1) 假如標題自己很詳細了(留意:詳細≠簡略,只是說觀點的寄義準確了不會ambiguous了):就不須要這步,由於沒有需要,加之去是多此一舉,違反了“every word tells”。

  好比:

  A)"Clearly, government has a responsibility to support the arts. However, if that support is going to produce anything of value, government must place no restrictions on the art that is produced. "

  To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above?

  B)是不是贊成“現今社會在網上找事情更好”

  以上兩個便是很具象化的,不須要界定。

  2) 標題中存在一些抽象詞、且幹系不清晰,就須要先界定:在我眼裏,**是甚麽意思。

  好比:

  A)"What education fails to teach us is to see the human community as one. Rather than focus on the unique differences that separate one nation from another, education should focus on the similarities among all people and places on Earth."

  【剖析】:對“共性”和“本性”應當界定一下

  B)"There is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way. "

  【剖析】:對“勝利”界定一下。

  Q:怎樣界定“勝利”?由於這題中已在問“def”了啊?

  以上便是GMAT寫作辦法及參考範文(三)的具體內容,考生可針對文中先容的辦法舉行有針對性的備考。末了GMAT頻道預祝眾人在GMAT測驗中獲得好成就!