新托福作文詞匯運用誤區

　　考生要想在托福寫作測驗中獲得一個不錯的成就，除要看重托福寫作評分尺度，對付托福寫作辭匯的應用也要相符範例才行，在托福寫作中，下面這些辭匯是果斷要防止的，下面為考生側重剖析下新托福作文辭匯應用誤區，願望能贊助考生掃清托福寫作高分路上的絆腳石。

　　1. 白話化說話或鄙諺

　　白話和書面語明顯是有比擬大的區其余：前者較隨便，後者較正式;前者可以在語法層面犯些不影響懂得的毛病，後者必需依照語法規矩謄寫;前者偶然受發音規矩影響，後者則不斟酌音節身分。因為這些差別，白話化的說話是不合適出如今範例寫作中的。

　　鄙諺也是同樣，作為另外一種較白話的語句，是大眾在平常生存中總結出來的普通易懂又順口的表達。特色是地區性強，較生存化。但整體說來，鄙諺是一種非正式的說話，平日也只能在非正式的場所應用。比方：

　　【例1】theenvironmental problem is prettyserious today.

　　修正：the environmental problem is extremely serious today.

　　【例2】Shouldhe study hard, the final exam is to become apiece of cake.

　　修正：Shouldhe study hard, the final exam is not to become a problem.

　　【例3】 Sincedemocracy has been acknowledged by the world, it is sort of strange to see some politicians lean on the authority.

　　修正：Sincedemocracy has been acknowledged by the world, it is a little strange to seesome politicians threaten the authority.

　　2. 行話

　　同窗們常常出錯的另外一個極度是行話。所謂行話，指的是某一特定的社會群體，因為事情上、運動上或其他目標上的配合性，在互相之間來往交換時，會發明、應用一些分歧於其他社會群體的辭匯、用語或標記。好比初期的軍事部分，再好比如今的通訊行業。我這裏所說的行話並無那末偏僻，指的更多的是門生在寫作進修中常常背誦一些“較難”的同義詞，卻沒有細心辨析這些同義詞寄義的差別。卻不知，極可能應用的便是只有英語國度的當局單元、貿易公司、學術機構、乃至部隊才會用的一些表達。固然，並非絕對不克不及用這些辭匯，除非不消這些專業用語就沒法表達其精確寄義。舉一些應用行話不適當的例子：

　　【例4】 Thenew generation is believed to commencetheir age by ameliorating the livingconditions in economically deprivedareas.

　　修正： Thenew generation is believed to start/create their age by improving/changing theliving conditions in poor/less-developed areas.

　　【例5】 It ishard to believe that students perusingbooks all the time without thinking critically can actually carry out viable life goals.

　　修正： It ishard to believe that students reading books all the time without thinking criticallycan actually arrange his life properly.

　　【例6】 When they night came, they went out for a perambulation, but soon enough, they shrank back in discomfort, surmisingthat an unidentified object tried to murder them.

　　修正： Whenthey night came, they went out for a walk, but soon enough, they returned in discomfort, dreading somebody in thedark who tried to kill them.

　　3. 過於“華美”或“虛張聲勢”的詞華

　　這通常為程度較高的門生為了獲得25分以上的分數，想發明一些本性化說話時所犯的毛病。如許的情形在教授教養過程當中見到的不在少數。有些說話讀來讓筆者看到面前一亮，但更多的情形是不只沒有給筆者留下深入的印象，反而使筆者覺得脆而不堅。有些乃至是艱澀難明的，讀來使人異常費勁。盜用一句名言便是“a misconception frequently held bynovice writers is that word choice mirrors thought: the more impenetrable theword, the more involved the ideas.” 如下也舉幾個例子：

　　【例7】 Unfortunately,the TV station in some countries does not have an appropriate classification ofadult entertainment, so children mayhave access to those unhealthy programs.

　　修正： Unfortunately, the TV station in somecountries does not have an appropriate classification of pornography, sochildren may have access to those unhealthy programs.

　　【例8】 One feasiblesolution is that the industry should be stopped and those who have more thanenough cars should sell their preownedautomobiles.

　　修正： One feasible solution is that theindustry should be stopped and those who have more than enough cars should selltheir used cars.

　　【例9】 I do believethat no country would refuse such revenueenhancers.

　　修正： I do believe that no country wouldrefuse such taxes.

　　上面三點是考生在新托福作文辭匯應用中常見的誤區，實在影響考生托福寫作成就的身分是多方面的，考生在日常平凡的備登科要留意鑒戒高分作文中的構造和用詞，以便讓本身有更好的提高，留學托福測驗頻道預祝考生在接下來的托福測驗中克敵制勝。