美國留學申請中，一些黌舍既請求PS，也請求SP，很多申請者便開端困惑了：PS和SP有差別嗎?PS和SP又有甚麽接洽呢?內容上，SP重視的更可能是和專業最相幹的，包含以前做過的相幹科研，表現對應的學術才能，而PS則更多的是重視發展閱歷，綜合各類對你發生影響的工作，假如何影響你末了決議要去美國留學。從時光規模來看，SP存眷的是如今到將來，而PS存眷的是曩昔到如今。下面，網為眾人分享一篇LLM專業小我陳說樣文，願望可以或許對眾人有所贊助。
I got my very first glimpse into law by watching my father, my hero, a Ph.D. of law and now the Chinese ambassador to Barbados. I have been inspired by his work as an international lawyer and a career diplomat while growing up. For many years, I have been preparing myself through academic and extra-curriculum activities, hoping that I can make a difference for the world. I believe pursuing the Master’s degree in Law at Cornell University will assist me in striving towards the goal.
With my dedication and my parent’s unconditional support, I successfully entered the …… University, one of the top law schools in China for legal education. I have explored a wide range of different law theories in the Civil Law field and had an opportunity to work on logical writing. It has been these years of study at …… University that has enlightened me and laid a solid foundation for my legal career.
In addition, I have also participated in various extra-curricular activities. As class monitor, the head of the Information Department in Student Committee, and the head of Research Department in our college, I am entrusted with many responsibilities. My leadership skills and organizational abilities have been greatly enhanced. Through various volunteer experiences, I have had more opportunities to help the under-privileged. All of these extracurricular activities are integral parts of a multiple legal education and have contributed to my professional growth.
Amid my strenuous study, I had an opportunity to participate in the American Legal System Study Program summer of my sophomore year and I was exposed to the great American culture. I engaged in an internship program at Michigan District Court, where I followed Judge ……. It was a great opportunity for me to see how the courts operate in the United States. The differences between the US and China legal systems provoked my curiosity. I was eager to explore how to ensure substantive justice in a case while following due process and how to apply precedents to different situations. I went on my second exchange study-abroad program to ……University fall of 2012 and participated in their LL.M. program. During this exchange study period, the issue of how to balance crime control and protection of human rights perplexed me. From then on, the thought of completing the LL.M. program in Cornell Law School, a school with unsurpassed legal education, has propelled me.
As a part of my degree, I interned at different legal departments. I was very fortunate to have an opportunity to intern at the Beijing office of ……. By involving myself in cases such as security offerings by Chinese corporate issuers and US security class actions against China-based companies listed on US stock exchanges, I became more aware of how a practicing lawyer gets involved in international trades. I researched on whether some foreign statutes are effective and I participated in legal work and preliminary drafting of research reports. It was the first time that I felt like I was making a contribution to society as lawyer. I sought for other internship opportunities to elevate my professionalism after my experience at ……. At Beijing …..People's Court, I learned the trial procedures in the Chinese court. Through drafting, imputing and proofreading legal documents, I have become more familiarized with the writing process and became more able to write with greater accuracy. The internship at Beijing …… Law Firm brought my overall abilities into full practice. From filing a marriage case, collecting evidences, putting it on trial to settling it, I participated in the whole process. With my sight set on more challenges, I would like to deepen my legal skills and be equipped for international experiences. To that end, pursuing an LL.M. at Cornell Law School seems to be the best option.
I believe that pursuing an LL.M. at Cornell University would provide me with the necessary foundation to understand the nuances and intricacies of different legal systems, and help me add an international perspective. I am most interested in taking courses at Cornell Law School such as International and Foreign Legal Research and International Law and Foreign Direct Investment, as well as being an active member of the Briggs Society of International Law. As one of the Ivy League universities, Cornell University combines outstanding, preeminent faculty with a diverse and talented student body. I would like to attend various special lectures and activities Cornell Law School offers to supplement the core curriculum. Completing the Cornell Law School’s LL.M. program will bring me to the next phase of my professional career.
網留學專家為眾人作了具體剖析：
1、思緒剖析
以門生尋求成為一位優良國際司法公事員的斗爭過程為主線：
第一段：遭到老爸的影響，想要成為一位國際公事員;
第二段：描寫在中國政法大學的專業進修過程，打好基本;
第三段：在課外運動中錘煉了本身各方面才能，這些才能讓本身更好地實踐司法;
第四段：在密歇根法庭練習坦蕩本身的眼界，而且收成了晉升本身所學的動力; 在外洋某大學的交流閱歷加深了本身的專業認知;
第五段：緊接著解釋了本身在練習傍邊獲得的各方面錘煉，進一步將所學轉化成實踐，也同時點名本身的不敷，引出申校緣故原由;
第六段：選取康奈爾大學的緣故原由。
2、亮點剖析
門生閱歷豐碩，整篇文章從論述妄想構成緣故原由，本身若何行為，而且如安在實踐中晉升本身然後發明本身不敷末了決議申請研討生的三個方面以時光次序，隨同本身熟悉的加深為重要思緒，展示了本身勤學不輟尋求本身的妄想的刻意。
3、文句剖析
1) I got my very first glimpse into law fields by watching my father, my hero, a Ph.D. of law and now the Chinese ambassador to Barbados.
“第一次熟悉……”異常活潑形象，說話樸素真誠。
2) I marveled at how mere written words could wield such power and mandate to effectively be the backbone of a society. I consider law as the bottom line of morale as well as its practical executor.
l簡短的兩句話解釋本身對付司法感化的認知，這與本身若何去加強司法的專業常識和技巧的盡力同等。
3)It was the first time that I felt like I was making a contribution to society as lawyer. I was eager for more.
註解本身對付司法的酷愛和投身於司法的刻意。
4) Completing the Cornell University’s LL.M. program will bring me to the next phase of my professional career becoming an established lawyer and ultimately to actively participate in International Organizations like the United Nations.
婉轉而又明白地解釋進修司法項目對付本身的贊助。
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