美國獎學金申請書要怎麽寫才最正確

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　　美國留學申請到獎學金，起首要讓獎學金評審委員會的另眼相看，其次，才斟酌托福、GRE等硬件前提。以是縱然硬件前提不凸起，但獎學金申請書獲得評審委員會的青睞，那獲得獎學金的概率就會大增。咱們用例子來解釋，美國大學獎學金申請書應當若何寫。

　　Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisio and personal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wires and metal, I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were...(有刪省)

　　公道地論述了申請者進修電子工程的念頭，進修念頭是評審委員異常看中的。同時，讀了這段筆墨，會使讀者沉醉在對童年舊事的美妙回想裏，借此感動評審委員的心。

　　另一篇修正過的文章開首用詩一樣平常的說話寫道(有刪省)：

　　......I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child, and I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, "What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!" As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science, and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.

　　末端呼應了開首，論述了作者為何要去美國念書：

　　I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: "She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries... Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca."

　　For me, the intellectual Mecca is the United States. ... I hope to continue my study and research, as detailed below. One day, I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits.

　　咱們可以想象地到，評審委員在讀了這位女生的申請文章今後，腦海裏確定能維妙維肖地顯現出一個勤學長進、充斥弘遠理想的將來女科學家的形象，怎樣會不拍桌驚嘆，盡力贊助這個女生登上前去學術聖地俏麗堅的飛機，成為第二個居裏夫人呢。