留學澳洲：雅思考試作文寫作技巧

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一、外顯銜接

所謂外顯銜接是指用特定的銜接詞將相幹信息舉行銜接。平日情形下，例子作為論據由for example, for instance, like, such as, take… as 等引出。

如：it is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways. For example, when an emergency occurs, such as a traffic accident or a violent crime, mobile phones can help the victims to call the police or an ambulance immediately for help.

本例中，for example 引出例子論證“mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.” 爾後面的 such as 則引出emergency 的詳細情勢。For instance 與它的用法完整雷同，即背面要接句子例證。 Like, such as, take…as 等直接名詞（或相稱於名詞的詞）。因為這些都是根本知識，這裏再也不贅述。

為了使銜接詞多樣化，發起考生應用下面的一些短語（或句式）銜接論點和論據：

…is a case in point;

…serve as a typical example

…can be taken as an example;

one example is that…

another one is that等

如：Working part time when you are studying in university is beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point（or‘my experiences serve as a typical example’）. Through those experiences, I have learned to be independent and responsible.

二、內化銜接

現實上，眾人看原汁原味的文英文文章會發明有些信息的銜接不消外顯式，而是經由過程某些特定的詞大概特定的方法給讀者以清楚的條理感，從而使文章信息通報更通行。

下面咱們來看一下哪些例證可以省去銜接詞，實現內化銜接。

1、人物閱歷作例子

個中的人物可所以名流，Thomas Edison gave us an example that success only comes after persistence and hard work. 也能夠是作者本身的親自閱歷 I remember that ten years ago cell phones were unusual and seldom seen. 人物閱歷作例子由於其較強的故事性而惹人存眷。然則牢記，假如應用名流做例證，要留意信息的精確性； 假如應用本身的親自閱歷做例子則要留意例子選取是不是典範、有說服力。然則不管如何，有人物閱歷時，必定會給人以異常明白的細節信息的感到，以是完整可以省去銜接詞。

2、數字信息作例子：

引入帶稀有字信息的例證，除可以更詳細、更詳確的解釋概念外，也能夠內化銜接詞，由於數字信息所要通報的必定是一個量化的觀點，而這一律念便是它所要論證的中間。看個例子：

The work was immense: filling about eighty large notebooks (and without a library to hand), Johnson wrote the definitions of over 40,000 words, and illustrated their many meanings with some 114,000 quotations drawn from English writing on every subject, from the Elizabethans to his own time.

例子中immense是概念中間詞，背面的詳細數字都是對這一中間詞的左證。（固然咱們不要忘卻這裏“：”也是在贊助這段筆墨內化銜接，相稱於“for example”）

3、專著名詞信息作例子

人名、地名屬於細節信息的領域，也常常出如今例證中，以一種’fact’的情勢湧現。如：

Air pollution is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen concern around the globe. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and Tokyo, new solutions to this old problem are being proposed and implemented with ever increasing speed.當你看到這些地名時，必定會想到它們是某一類具備雷同性子的地區的代表，那末天然也便是’點’信息，而非‘面’信息，從而可以省去銜接詞的應用，卻仍然堅持主次明白。

別的諸準期刊雜誌名、書名等專著名詞也能夠有相似的用法。

4、一些小的介詞（短語）引誘例子

假如眾人留意總結，會發明雅思瀏覽文章中有一些介詞（短語）也能夠引出例子。

如：from…to: Toughened glass is found everywhere, from cars and bus shelters to the windows, walls and roofs of thousands of buildings around the world.

再如：including: …..

Other substances were then introduced: including fillers, catalysts and hexa.

這裏including 相稱於such，like等。

綜上，舉例論證除須要緊緊控制眾人熟知的表舉例的銜接詞外，還要留意積聚一些隱去銜接詞卻嵌入一些表細節信息的辭匯的情形，大概留意進修老外用標點標記和被咱們歧視的一些小詞來標示文章條理的奇妙的做法。同時，同窗們也要存眷一下，人物閱歷和究竟信息（特別是帶稀有字、專著名詞的究竟）作例證更有說服力也異常輕易控制。以是同窗們要從舉例論證的銜接詞、經常使用例子範例等角度周全控制舉例論證，從而讓舉例論證更好地論證概念，更好的為雅思鴻文文辦事。